Yoko fanart ver 1.5

The original piece was done around 2.5 years ago and even back then I wasn't too happy with the result.  Due to lack of skill, I just don't know how to complete the piece.  So now! I decided to go back and see what I could've done to improve without completely transformed the piece. 

Now, I'm little satisfied and it feels more finish.  Not at the level of finish I wanted, but it'll have to do for now.  I guess I still need to do lots more practice and experimentation, and someday I'll reach that next level.